Comments on: Get your clause off me! http://www.copylicious.com/2009/08/get-your-clause-off-me/ High-calorie ideas for hungry businesses Sat, 31 Jul 2010 13:43:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Kelly http://www.copylicious.com/2009/08/get-your-clause-off-me/comment-page-1/#comment-599 Kelly Wed, 26 Aug 2009 18:00:23 +0000 http://www.copylicious.com/?p=1978#comment-599 Brad, thanks! Dave, I love the phrase "menagerie of mumbo jumbo." I never thought that clear writing could be a way of taking better care of ourselves, but you're totally right. Kevin, thank you! I'm so glad we connected. Brad, thanks!

Dave, I love the phrase “menagerie of mumbo jumbo.” I never thought that clear writing could be a way of taking better care of ourselves, but you’re totally right.

Kevin, thank you! I’m so glad we connected.

]]> By: Kevin McQueen http://www.copylicious.com/2009/08/get-your-clause-off-me/comment-page-1/#comment-596 Kevin McQueen Fri, 21 Aug 2009 23:22:59 +0000 http://www.copylicious.com/?p=1978#comment-596 Kelly, Wow! What a great first impression I have of you this week. You are a talent and I want to thank you for referring me to your favorite developers. I look forward to working with you in the future to grow my business and further improve my quality of life. Have an amazing weekend. Kelly, Wow! What a great first impression I have of you this week. You are a talent and I want to thank you for referring me to your favorite developers. I look forward to working with you in the future to grow my business and further improve my quality of life. Have an amazing weekend.

]]> By: Nathalie Lussier http://www.copylicious.com/2009/08/get-your-clause-off-me/comment-page-1/#comment-592 Nathalie Lussier Thu, 20 Aug 2009 17:33:49 +0000 http://www.copylicious.com/?p=1978#comment-592 Aww, as a "recovering" engineer, I can totally see myself in this. Thank you for writing it! I love your writing, it just sparks off the page (or screen, as it were). I was forced to write 30 page documents for my engineering degree in University, so the extra clauses were probably picked up for extra padding. Now I know it's okay to let them go. Woohoo! :) .-= Nathalie Lussier´s last blog ..<a href="http://www.rawfoodswitch.com/raw-food-product-reviews/schizandra-gates-mu-book-review/" rel="nofollow">Schizandra and the Gates of Mu Book Review</a> =-. Aww, as a “recovering” engineer, I can totally see myself in this. Thank you for writing it! I love your writing, it just sparks off the page (or screen, as it were). I was forced to write 30 page documents for my engineering degree in University, so the extra clauses were probably picked up for extra padding. Now I know it’s okay to let them go.

Woohoo! :)
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]]> By: dave http://www.copylicious.com/2009/08/get-your-clause-off-me/comment-page-1/#comment-590 dave Thu, 20 Aug 2009 13:57:38 +0000 http://www.copylicious.com/?p=1978#comment-590 Editing Kelly? Seems to me it's more like decryption. It also seems as if clear writing is an act of kindness to one's self. How can one think in such a menagerie of mumbo jumbo? .-= dave´s last blog ..<a href="http://www.daverothacker.com/rothacker_reviews/2009/08/my-imaginary-council.html" rel="nofollow">My Imaginary Council</a> =-. Editing Kelly? Seems to me it’s more like decryption. It also seems as if clear writing is an act of kindness to one’s self. How can one think in such a menagerie of mumbo jumbo?
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]]> By: Brad Shorr http://www.copylicious.com/2009/08/get-your-clause-off-me/comment-page-1/#comment-588 Brad Shorr Thu, 20 Aug 2009 10:50:34 +0000 http://www.copylicious.com/?p=1978#comment-588 Hi Kelly, Nicely done! Instructive study of how life can be injected into even the deadest as a doornail copy. Your target may have been easy, but it's typical of what you see on many thousands of corporate websites. .-= Brad Shorr´s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/WordSellInc/~3/i25Oqm8GuIE/" rel="nofollow">The Google Chrome Browser Diet</a> =-. Hi Kelly, Nicely done! Instructive study of how life can be injected into even the deadest as a doornail copy. Your target may have been easy, but it’s typical of what you see on many thousands of corporate websites.
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